20.5.07

notes







jus this

You cannot get it right
move as you like your mouth
stutters up heart failed
jerked out head
wink to eye
as sore hand weaves to
catalogues of
this engine
or yer lungs
and the days of your dancer
your walking blues

instead we have night its star blissed counters
your hips wove into the after noon sunlight
the california sunset
the


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later she writes: as when Jill grabbed her legs off the jambs. of the disjuncture.
without feeling sorry for "myself" its a set of scribbles pieces for what's likely to later become a poem. Ive no wish to insult anyone's intelligence, or anyone who's kind enough to read here. So I think adding the context in this case helps.